If you want to go back and review it's chapter eight. Daddy Diggs has made a gift of his business to Olive, who has been saving for her own brothel featuring spanking. Marie, who has caused many problems for Cora and the others due to her lying and manipulation is now Olive's employee. And she must be punished.
In what I consider to be a very memorable scene, Olive administers a few swats to Marie on the saloon's stage, then auctioned off the privilege of administering the rest of her punishment to the highest bidder.
Take a minute and go back to read the whole scene. It's wonderfully fun and sexy, then come back and tell us what you thought.
Marie's behavior all along was screaming for a spanking of some sort. The fact that she got it from Olive seems like a perfect way to make sure the price was paid with no potentially damaging effects on Cora's relationship with Jake. As far as the hotness of the scene between Olive and Marie goes, I think it was well-written and sexy. The guys hooting in the background made it more realistic, and Olive's decision to turn the punishment over to a bidder was a savvy move.
ReplyDeleteOverall, a great, hot scene that tied up a lot of loose ends.
Thank you, Trish and Celeste! It's the first public spanking scene I've written, so I agonized over it a bit, but I felt like Marie did deserve it, and it was ok to humiliate her that way since she made $$ off it at the same time.
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