It's Saturday! Today I am featuring a snippet from my story Reconnecting which is part of Coming To Terms.
Blurb: When Daisy's online time begins to interfere with her relationship with her husband, Reece, he takes matters into his own hands. In addition to applying a liberal dose of discipline to her backside which has spent too much time sitting at the computer, he arranges for them to spend some time at a remote resort with no Wi-Fi. Sometimes you have to disconnect in order to reconnect.
In this opening scene, Reece and Daisy are having a "discussion" about the number of blogs Daisy visited.
“There was ‘My Bottom Smarts’.”
“I bet it does.” Reece cracked into her right cheek again.
“And ‘Redbooty Woman’.” Daisy strained to concentrate on an answer and talk while her butt burned from the onslaught of Reece’s firm hand.
“Sounds appropriate, what else?”
“’B-bright Bottom’.”
“Are you making these names up”? Reece accused.
That made me laugh. I know she's not making them up, but it sure sounds that way. No wonder Reece is supicious. Great snippet, Celeste. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteLOL They do sound like something she would make up.
ReplyDeleteI think she should have included "Naughty Wife". :D
ReplyDeleteHahaha that made me giggle! really cut!
ReplyDeleteOMG! "... a remote resort with no Wi-Fi." CHILLS. I had CHILLS.
ReplyDeleteA great (funny) premise but also ... "hits" a bit close to home for me as a web-geek. Heh. Awesome stuff! :)
Yes...I didn't have to look too hard to find my inspiration.
DeleteCute. They do sound made up, especially with her sporting a pinkened rear of her own. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone! I had fun writing this scene and I'm grateful to the actual bloggers who were good sports and let me use their names and blogs.
ReplyDeleteI just loved your mentions of all the spanking bloggers. Especially since I know them all. I wonder how many people who are unfamiliar with them will Google them and look them up?
ReplyDeleteGood question. I'll have to check and see if any of them have had an increase in their pv's. Or maybe people thought I really did make them up.
DeleteOMG! That had me laughing so loud! You don’t even think about the names of people’s blogs after a while but put in that context… Great snippet Celeste :)
ReplyDeleteFunny! I visit those blogs almost daily too! :)
ReplyDeleteVery funny. I totally love the last line. :)
ReplyDeleteVery funny. I really enjoyed this story in Coming to Terms, and I think about it every time I am planted behind my laptop ignoring my husband... not that it's very often. Well maybe a little... wait, what time is it?
ReplyDeleteThis was a great story, Celeste! I really enjoyed it. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteLoved the use of the spanking blogs! Too awesome!
ReplyDeleteI loved this! So funny!
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