Friday, October 4, 2013

#SatSpanks More Expectorating

Thanks to everyone who commented on last week's post where I had a question about a particular scene in my WIP, tentatively called Becoming A Proper Lady, The Diary of Miss Sarah McLean. Since we had so much fun last week, I thought I'd share the original spit-take.

I promise, next week, no more spitting.


“You are quite the little hellion, Yankee girl.”

“Stop calling me that,” I said, my jaw clenched in anger and resolution.

“Since I do not know your real name, what choice do I have?” Although I was certain he had exerted himself thoroughly in my punishment, which continued unabated, he spoke as calmly as if he were reading the news.

I am not proud of this, and if I am asked directly to verify its accuracy, I cannot vouch for my own future honesty, but I shall tell you, Dear Diary.

While tottering across his knee, I turned my head as best I could but could not get a good enough angle to spit in his face, so instead, I worked up an impressive amount of spittle which I then projected onto his shoe with both accuracy and a fair amount of delight.

He paused in his efforts to scorch my rump, stood me up (which then caused my skirts to thankfully fall back into place over my reddened bottom) and stared down at his saliva adorned shoe. 


20 comments:

  1. I have to say Celeste, the title had me cringing. I am a nurse and expectorating makes me think of, well.... YUK. But I was pleasantly surprised by this cute snippet. He is shocked that she spit on his shoe, is she ready for the repercussions?

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  2. This is the like the point in the movie where the hero flings sarcastic comments at the bad guy. It doesn't go well for the hero from that point forward. LOL. I love seeing a heroine fight back and not meekly take a spanking. I can imagine spitting would be quite shocking in Regency times.

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  3. It's amazing, Celeste. I'm repulsed and mesmerized at the same time. I love her spirit!

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  4. I don't think she is going to be nearly so pleased with herself shortly, and I want to read all about it.

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  5. Uh oh, sounds like she's really in trouble now. Love her spirit though.

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  6. I'm really starting to like the Yankee girl. I could almost see her lining up her aim at his shoe. LOL
    What a sassy girl!

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  7. Spitting on someone? Was she a feral child? This poor guy's got his work cut out for him.

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  8. oh brother...not a good way to end a spanking, perhaps she needed more lol

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  9. Oh, the self-referential moment is perfect, Celeste. Yum.

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  10. oh oh, she spits again! I must say, I'm picturing more spanking for her :D

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  11. Oh boy, she's really in for it now. I think a paddle is needed at this point;)

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  12. I just thought of something...maybe she was trying to spit-shine his shoes. Really, she's doing him a favor.

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  13. That made me giggle, Celeste. Regency girl scout! :)
    I love her fire!
    I can't wait to hear what happens next.
    Very fun!!!

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  14. Oh dear. I can just imagine what's going through his mind. This puts a different spin on "spitfire." Well done, Celeste.

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  15. Oh My! She is sure to be in some big trouble now...

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  16. I love this. Fiesty brats are so much fun in spanking romances.

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