The challenge is to find the word LOOK in your current work in progress and then post the sentences around it. Choose your three favorite Looks to post.
Mine are from my current work in progrees: Newlywed...Again the story of a couple in their 40s who are taking a second (or third) chance on love.
*****
We checked in to the
hotel, one of the strip casinos, and headed for our room. As we approached the
room, excitement hurried me along. Even though we’d agreed on a regular room,
I’d booked us a suite. I knew Jack would love the surprise.
I let him open the door and then he attempted to carry me
over the threshold, but given his bad back and my middle aged ass, I suggested
we save our energy for consummating our marriage. Besides, I wanted to see the LOOK on his face
when he saw the suite and if he was straining under my weight it might be hard
for him to focus.
******
Jack was so handsome it made my heart ache to LOOK at him
and realize that he loved me. Me. And wanted to spend the rest of his life with
me. Me. Can you believe it? I hardly can. In fact, I’d become so determined
that there was no man out there for me that I’d stopped shaving my legs. What
was the point?
On the fourth day of my cavewoman experiment the dog rubbed
up against my calf and left a tuft of hair, so I started to at least shave
anything in the dog’s range.
*****
Like
a moth to a flame, I headed for, well, head. I crawled onto the
lower part of the bed and knelt between his legs and took his cock into my mouth. All of it. All the way down to the shaft. I nestled his balls in my right hand, grasped the base of his shaft in my left and slid my mouth and hand up and down the length of him in unison.
lower part of the bed and knelt between his legs and took his cock into my mouth. All of it. All the way down to the shaft. I nestled his balls in my right hand, grasped the base of his shaft in my left and slid my mouth and hand up and down the length of him in unison.
I LOOKEd up at Jack, because I sort of like having an
audience and knowing that my efforts are appreciated gets me hot. He did not
disappoint. Propped up on a couple of
pillows so he could watch, Jack smiled his approval. Our eyes met and I felt
him get even harder against my tongue.
****
I've learned that I use "look" pretty frequently so I might need to get a thesaurus. A fun challenge, Sophie. Thanks!
And now I'm throwing down the challenge to:
Oooooh...those blurbs are hot. I'm off to LOOK now for my own. Challenge accepted! :D
ReplyDeleteYou are SO FUNNY. See my friend Mimi from my posting. You'd get along. We all would. A happy sagging trio.
ReplyDeleteYou rock six ways from Tuesday.
xox
Soph.
All good excerpts! Gonna have to find TWO people to tag.
ReplyDeleteThat is hilarious!! I couldn't find excerpts as good as yours, but I put three up. Thanks for a great idea!
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