The set up---Kate has teased her husband into playing "the naughty girl game" with her.
For a slow starter in this little role playing game, Jack
learned fast and seemed to grow into the role, if you know what I mean, with
each passing moment.
He walked toward me, a sexy but determined grin on his face,
and grasped my wrist. It wasn’t a sensuous move, but the feeling of being taken
in hand, the anticipation that I was about to submit to something unknown,
created a veritable ocean in my nether yaya.
Jack gave my wrist a gentle tug at the same time that he put
his foot on a rung of one of the bar stools around the kitchen island. Next
thing I knew, I was across his denim clad knee, skirt up and panties
down.
He sure moved fast.
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Nice, very nice! Like the older heroine too. How old is the hero?
ReplyDeleteI haven't really said how old he is, but in my mind he's a bit older. Not a cougar story.
DeleteI love that line with....created a veritable ocean in my nether yaya. Keep working Celeste, so the wip progress becomes the new story finished.
ReplyDeleteI sent the first ugly draft of it to my critique partner last night, which was a great relief to me. Now I wait and hope she doesn't write back and suggest that I look for another job. :)
DeleteI had to look up the spelling of nether yaya!
I agree about the older heroine! (Says the woman who writes younger heroines...)
ReplyDeleteNether yaya...LOL...are you a Big Bang fan?
Love the last line after the build-up.
Yes! Amy Farrah Fowler is my favorite character and it's sad how excited I am for the season premier this week.
DeleteIn honor of The Big Bang Theory Season premier---we should all use the phrase "nether yaya" in a blog post this week. Who's with me?
LOL! I found it SO disappointing when the writers turned her into a soft gushy be-nice-to-me "girl" character. I adored her when she told Sheldon not to smother her. It was such a middle-finger flip to stereotypes about women and girlfriends.
Delete*giggle* I don't usually write about nether yayas, but for you I will find a way. It will be an Ana first. :D
Sometimes, fast is a good thing. Great snippet :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by, Karla. Just bought More Than Words and I'm looking forward to reading it.
DeleteNether yaya had me cracking up too!! Great six!
ReplyDeleteThanks Renee. Still makes me giggle too.
DeleteHa! Nice six. I love the transition from slow started to fast mover.
ReplyDeleteI know I should act all cool like I intended for that transition to happen....so I'll just keep pretending that I did. LOL
DeleteLoved it! Loved nether yaya too. Too funny!
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